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Shitty Lungs : A Poem by Simon Dalaigh


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joeydominguez325 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013
HAHAHA! this one's cool :D
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92KICKSTART Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student General Artist
=D
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MidshipmanK Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012
It's so Simon XD I love
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Midnight4200 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Student General Artist
warms the heart and makes you piss your pants
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EllaMinnoP Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Omg haha this is awesome!!
Easily the best Valentines day poem ever!! :)
:lmao:
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JackieDenise Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
:D yes. Just yes.
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student Writer
:aww:
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Wandererofthestars Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
HAhaha! I LOVE it! XD
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student Writer
:iconluvluvplz:
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crashmypartyhard Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
just awesome.
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student Writer
:iconilikeitplz:
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crashmypartyhard Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
:iconohuplz:
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Cheburaskah Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student General Artist
I.. I love him..
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student Writer
Yey! :D
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MzyLeRouge Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student Writer
omg Simon.
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student Writer
:XD:
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BinturongBoat Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Currently I'm on a computer that doesn't have a pdf browser, so I can't read it XD Can't wait to read it though! Congrats on making the front page!! :heart:
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student Writer
It says this:

Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
I am not dead,
Which I’m sure that you knew.
Your words in my heart,
In my head you will stay:
You are so very smart
You take my breath right away—
Oh goddamn, never mind,
It is not your sharp tongue
That puts my breath in a bind
No, it’s just my bad lung.
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BinturongBoat Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, thank you! :la: Really good poem, I can hear his voice in the words :)
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Erica-Roy Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012
What a truly heartfelt poem that was.
It brought me to tears.
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student Writer
It's truly a masterpiece
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xXnerd101Xx Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Simon, you surely know how to woo a girl XD
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student Writer
It's one of his many talents
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