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-The Moon is Down- by HennaLucas -The Moon is Down- by HennaLucas
There ain't no moon tonight
It's hard for me to see
But if I can catch a glimpse of you
It helps me feel at ease
It helps me sleep
All my life I've watched you dance along
To music that I can't hear
I ain't equipped to hear those songs

The Moon is Down - Radical Face

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Shiloh Tucker & Emmaline Caverly (c) me
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BitterWinters Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012
I love this! Will you be writing more chapters for this story soon?
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Student Writer
Hopefully!
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Addicted-Squared Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awww, it's such a sweet drawing! I miss Melanie though, but I think Emmaline will be great, too. ;)
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Student Writer
She's very similar to Melanie in personality and appearance: her hair's shorter, she has different colored eyes, though, and she has a few more gnarlier character flaws, since I'm tuning up the intensity of the new plot.
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Addicted-Squared Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice. Emmaline's very gorgeous ;)
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0raspberries0 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I miss Mel, but I'm sure I will grow to like Emmaline too. :)
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Student Writer
I hope you will! She's still very similar to her- just shorter hair and different eye-color and a few more gnarlier character flaws.
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0raspberries0 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's good. My hopes are up! :D
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8-BitQuilter Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ASDFGH, your shading skills are awesome! :la:
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Student Writer
d'aw, thank you!
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billytheixi Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012
I love Emmaline's design! She's so pretty.

I have to admit, I will miss Mel a bit, but characters change. Honestly, some of my characters have changed so much, they're hardly recognizable from their first draft. xD

The atmosphere is so pretty, and I love the ciggarette smoke and the pose.
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you! And unfortunately, characters have to change sometimes. Her personality is still pretty similar, though there are several darker aspects now, since I'm tuning up the intensity of the new plot.
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billytheixi Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012
You're welcome! They definitely do. It's funny for me to go back and look at my very first drafts of characters and see how much they've changed. A character who was once incredibly joking and optimistic is now much more serious and a bit more darker.

I'm getting so excited for this story, really.
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roxmarie Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i must confess that in spite of the fact that you're just an amazing wirter and there's no denying that... i liked the other version better and i'm sad because you changed it.
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Student Writer
It's ok- I know that not all of my fans are happy about it, but I wasn't feeling the characters or plot, and if I can't get passionate about something, I've got to either abandon it or change it. I loved Shiloh too much to abandon him, so I changed it, and now I'm excited about my book. Hopefully you'll grow to like it
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roxmarie Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yes, i totally understand the feeling.
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KiraKiraBubble Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Student Writer
:D
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Cheburaskah Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Student General Artist
This is so amazing and beautiful I just want to cry!
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Student Writer
d'aw, thank you!
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JackyJinx Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ahh so Mel's name is Emmaline
I love this whole piece!!
stunning!!!
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Student Writer
Yep- I heard it and fell in love with it immediately. Their couple name is now "Shimmy"- Shiloh & Emmy
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JackyJinx Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I like this name better then mel I have to say. its very pretty!! <3 will she still have the same little brother or is that not allowed to be said yet??

I LOVE THAT SHIP NAME
SHIMMY
AND SHAKE IT
LDGHAODGIH HAHA I SHIP SHIMMY that has the best ring XD
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medievallass Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lovely work I really like the atmosphere of the piece. :D

Hayley :floating:
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks!
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