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-The Moon in the Door- by HennaLucas -The Moon in the Door- by HennaLucas

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So guys, "Keeping Things Whole" has kind of been dead for awhile. I don't know what to do with it and I'm not passionate about it any more. But I have a good feeling about this new draft: Shiloh and Mel (not sure if that will still be her name) are in it, it's just a different plot. So I apologize for that, but I'm happy with how this is turning out so far.

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When Shiloh Tucker was born, his life expectancy was that of any other child, until he was diagnosed with a congenial heart defect as an infant. But after seventeen years of being told he would die, Shiloh Tucker is very much alive, with one little catch: after his heart failed him in infancy, his brain lost too much oxygen in the occipital lobe. So in short, he's certainly kicking, but he has been legally blind since his fourth week of life.
Compromise. Thatís what lifeís about, isnít it?
Shiloh doesn't see it that way- he doesn't like it one bit. But his lack of sight certainly never held him back from a good fistfight, and three expulsions and a broken nose later, Shiloh Tucker is being sent to live with his estranged father's relatives in Nantucket, Massachusetts, where he just might find that there's more to sight than simply seeing.
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inkyrabbit Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Student
This is so abominably amazing I don't even know what to say, except keep up the phenomenal work and try to avoid using very so much at the beginning: D
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you!
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cayiko Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012
Before today I wouldn't have believed that I could cry over characters I've been exposed to for just thirteen pages.
You are an amazing writer, really.
... and I can barely remember a handful of other times I cried when reading.
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Cherushii13 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Student
This is an amazing storyline! I love Shiloh's personality, and his story (And such a unique name!) and I can't wait to read the rest of the story :)
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Midnight4200 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Student General Artist
if a kid named CYRIL was being a nub to me, i'd break his nose too.

anyway, i love your writing. it's definitely more than words.
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KiraKiraBubble Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012
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dreamingoflight Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Student Writer
It's not on Wattpad..... :(
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Student Writer
There we go, it's been fixed
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dreamingoflight Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Student Writer
thanks!!
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MidshipmanK Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012
You write so beautifully. <3 I definitely like the sound of this book, even though this is just the beginning. I love the plot, too, and I guess it's okay that I don't know the previous plot....
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