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-So Sorry- by HennaLucas -So Sorry- by HennaLucas
"The moment the McMurray's vows and rings were exchanged and the uproarious applause died down, Holly saw Simon slip away and run out the back door of the church. His shoes clicked upon the cobbles, and with concern, she followed him outside. She found him sitting upon the stone steps, fiddling with his oxygen tube. As she had grown used to, Holly sat beside him, and without warning, he turned and threw his arms around her. They were slender and cool and they held her tightly to the thin chest that lay just beneath the pressed black fabric of his suit.
"Simon!" she cried out in surprise as she held him, too."What's wrong?"
He shook his head into her shoulder. "I'm so sorry, Holly."
"What on earth for?"
"I'm sorry I won't live long enough to marry you like that," he murmured. "I'm sorry."


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listened to Autumn Leaves by Ed Sheeran.

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art, writing, characters (c) me
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typewriter-travels Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I thought this was so cute up until the end...

"I'm sorry I won't live long enough to marry you like that," he murmured. "I'm sorry."

You can break a heart in a matter of seconds with nothing but a sentence! Wow, this is bittersweet. Beautiful. Keep on keeping on (;
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013  Student Writer
aw, I'm sorry!
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typewriter-travels Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hahaha no, you're fantastic!
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MillyMansfieldParker Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Your pictures and stories are so Beautiful..
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you!
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LaurenHunter793 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013
I might cry...
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2-Falling-Feathers Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013
I'm pretty sure that you're getting better and better at making me emotional as time goes on! I love everything you write/draw!! I wish I had your talent!
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IryBell Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013
Why? WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO US ;_; ? I'm not even an emotional person! But as a side note, congratulations on your writing and characters. They are very beautiful :) ...But still. WHY do you enjoy breaking people's hearts?
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Student Writer
oh gosh, thanks!
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CaptSunshine Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
You are breaking my heart.
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Student Writer
just doin my job, hun :heart:
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Mai-ChanL Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
Owww so sad and cute!! Love it so much
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you!
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Noriko-chan5 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Student Artist
this is so sweet and sad
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you <3
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RocioZero Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beautiful ;_;
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Student Writer
aw, thank you!
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FantasiaVII Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
Oh my God. That just went through me like a knife. Ow. Simon....
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Student Writer
:ohnoes:
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MidshipmanK Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
:tears: Oh, Simon....
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Student Writer
:(
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JarOfBlues Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Beautiful!
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you!
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xXnerd101Xx Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh gosh, that's really sad. For a moment, I thought she was marrying another guy (I don't really know much about this particular story of yours) and was a bit confused at first. But this is even worse, because even if he does die, which is more than likely, she'll probably marry another guy anyways. And we're back to square one... or something like that. :p
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Student Writer
You'll have to wait and see where the story goes ;)
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Conwant Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
That song didn't really help me stop tearing up... :'(
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Student Writer
:XD: Sad song, huh?
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Conwant Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
You bet.. :'(
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FlooffyEars Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Student General Artist
Ok, your art and writing is superb and I almost just cried. Thats is so beautiful and sweet and sad.
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Student Writer
aw, thank you!
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FlooffyEars Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Student General Artist
Anytime. You are an inspiration!
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lunakins16 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
whO TOLD YOU THIS WAS OKAY
but lovely nonetheless
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Student Writer
aw :ohnoes:
But thank you!
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TheDivineMissM-94 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconcrycryplz: Simon don't talk that way!! Oh my gosh I haven't even had the time to read any of this story yet and I still love the two of them so much this made me tear up, especially his last bit of dialogue. Why do you always have to kill off the special ones? :iconcomebackplz:
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Student Writer
aww, I'm sorry!
And who knows? Maybe I don't kill him off
you'll just have to read and find out
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TheDivineMissM-94 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
... Now I'm very suspicious... are you just trying to get my hopes up to crush them?? :paranoid:
You see what you've done to me?!?!? :eager: :rofl:
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Cheburaskah Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Student General Artist
Oh my God, Simon FEELS WHY
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Student Writer
:iconohnoesplz:
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Living-Magikally Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ASDJF;LKASJDF;LKAJSDFKLJ I WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT! brilliant work, though :)
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Student Writer
:ohnoes: But thank you!
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Maevethebrave Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So sad!! )'X
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Student Writer
yeah :(
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ToThoseInterested Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Why do you hurt me this way?
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Student Writer
sorry :(
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