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As poll results showed that people did want more PS asides and deleted scenes, this is a stand-alone aside I wrote for a possible novella: a collection of short stories about Benjamin's childhood and young-adulthood. Clearly, this is written in a different style than I usually write, but I hope you enjoy it.

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pastelghost Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is so stunning and beautiful, especially that first paragraph. You are a fantastic writer. :)
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you!
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elewa9 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Student Writer
Don't worry - you made a wonderful choice in style. The seemingly detached narration worked well for the piece, and I enjoyed seeing glimpses into the theory of what fueled Benjamin's choices. The way you depict the little brother is also very captivating, particularly the part where he's staring at the flames. I only wish that I could see him as clearly as I see Benjamin.

It's a lovely piece. I love the details, "as one watches a film reel," for instance. That's one of your strengths - poignant, efficient descriptions. Can't wait to see more!
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you so much! I love hearing more specific feedback like this
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elewa9 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Student Writer
No problem! I enjoy giving it, especially for pieces like these - you pretty much pull the critique out of me hahaha.

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twilght-incantations Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You are just such a beautiful writer :heart: This little bit was just inspiring as usual!
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you so much!
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aieren Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
No matter the style you choose your writing is astonishing. What awes me the most is your ability to capture emotion and make your characters so believably human that they jump off the page. I definitely enjoyed it!
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Student Writer
Oh goodness, thank you!
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aieren Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem ;)
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