I don't believe I've ever read anything so short that captured my attention so thoroughly. I forgot where I was, and the end of the entry caught me by surprise... truly, you possess incredible talent. Good luck with the project!
How do you get over writers block or start a short story? Because my dad surprised me by entering me in a writing competition and has already paid the entry fee, and now that he told me I cant write at all. The deadline is fast approaching and i'd hate to waste his money. Thank you and sorry for the inconvenience, your picture and writing is flawless, as usual, which is why i came to you for help
Um... *peeks* This is amazing and all (as it always is pfft), but I couldn't help but notice a little mistake on page 22.
"Sure she did. Simon, that tube quite nearly saved your life. Do you realize that you nearly passed on last night?" "The key word here is 'almost'," replied Simon, lifting off his mask to scratch his nose.
You said 'nearly' in the sentence and then Simon said 'almost'. I don't know if that was deliberate, I just spotted it and felt I should tell you. That is all.
Dang can't wait to read the rest Is the book finished? How many chapters? I really love Simon's character especially, really sweet, really realistic Oh, also, I'll note you with what I think were a few errors, I hope you don't mind
Page 50, paragraph 11, "“It’s a restaurant—you’re allowed to eat hear, you know,”" Hear should be here. Otherwise, impeccable writing. I legitimately lost myself in these few chapters, and eagerly await more.
You. I'm used to go 'round the internet reading the work of young writers such as ourselves, and I think I found some pretty good people that, if one day release a book, I'll definitely buy it. And hell yeah, you're for sure one of them. I really like your literary voice and your stories. Hope you'll be recognized one day