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First 5 Chapters of 'The Things That Stay' by HennaLucas First 5 Chapters of 'The Things That Stay' by HennaLucas

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writing, story & characters (c) me
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CrazyDemonGirl Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014
I don't believe I've ever read anything so short that captured my attention so thoroughly. I forgot where I was, and the end of the entry caught me by surprise... truly, you possess incredible talent. Good luck with the project!
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you!
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queenofwhatever Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014
 How do you get over writers block or start a short story? Because my dad surprised me by entering me in a writing competition and has already paid the entry fee, and now that he told me I cant write at all. The deadline is fast approaching and i'd hate to waste his money. Thank you and sorry for the inconvenience, your picture and writing is flawless, as usual, which is why i came to you for help :)
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pierdepoule Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Um... *peeks*
This is amazing and all (as it always is pfft), but I couldn't help but notice a little mistake on page 22.


"Sure she did. Simon, that tube quite nearly saved your life. Do you realize that you nearly passed on last night?"
"The key word here is 'almost'," replied Simon, lifting off his mask to scratch his nose.

You said 'nearly' in the sentence and then Simon said 'almost'. I don't know if that was deliberate, I just spotted it and felt I should tell you. That is all.

Keep being awesome :)
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fire-graceling Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist
You have a amazing way with word, and i cant wait for paper stars to be published so that i may add a copy of it to my book collection
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Student Writer
aw, thank you!
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Maevethebrave Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Dang can't wait to read the rest :D Is the book finished? How many chapters? :D
I really love Simon's character especially, really sweet, really realistic :)
Oh, also, I'll note you with what I think were a few errors, I hope you don't mind :)
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HennaLucas Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks! And it's definitely not finished: I've only written this much
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Maevethebrave Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh ok! Awesome, good luck and I look forward to reading when you're done :)
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zerudez Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, right when I needed something to read..
This is amazing, I only read the first few pages and I'll read the rest when I come home :D
Keep it up.
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