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-Better Days- by HennaLucas -Better Days- by HennaLucas
And I swear I saw a pair of green eyes and tawny hair, a freckled cheek. I see the way the scar on his brow shifts when he is surprised, I see the parentheses round his mouth when he smiles, the queer way hed only show the top row of his teeth, even when he laughed. I hear the small rush of breath hed make after saying something important, the laugh hed do when he was nervous. I feel the tender, calloused warmth of his palm against mine, the soft pressure of his chin resting upon my hair, the gentle tension after a kiss.
...But the problem with moments like these is that they only last a moment. I blink, and I am Grandma Sara once again.
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ashleyjordan Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is glorious, I am not often taken by others stories but with every image, I am drawn further in. I really love your character design, he is such a handsome boy and even reminds me of my own oc(that is not to detract from your's at all! Your's is so nice and it's wonderful to see how you draw him). I think your story is stunning, your skills and hard work are so evident and I truly hope you'll be able to publish this someday.
HennaLucas Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Student Writer
aw, thank you! :aww:
HeartofGears Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Student General Artist
Oh my gosh! The emotion and stuff is captured so well in this! It's beautiful!
Evahoodie Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Writer
owww... I think I'm going to cry... I think your story's amazing even thought I have not read it. If I judge from the writing under drawings.. I'm sure it's really interesting. but sad too.
DaniBlueStar Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Lovely. :heart:
HennaLucas Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you!
TheAfterShock Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Student General Artist
Awww. That's so cute! I hate sounding so girly but this is seriously sweet. I mean, this is how I wanna be when I'm old. You're writing is great. i love it. <3
HennaLucas Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Student Writer
rain-and-sunshine Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Professional General Artist
your writing is beautiful. the slightly out-of-focus look of the picture and the warm colors fit it so well.
HennaLucas Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you!
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